AN ANCIENT RACE
I came upon myself one day
Hoping there to find
Someone truly great and grand
Some One quite divine
Reflections of me seemed to prove
That I was all I thought
High and noble, quite advanced
Superior, self-wrought
To all the others I was king
At least so to myself
I was different than they were
And twice as good as well
No one could me anything
Was not my Image clear? (dear)
Me to everyone I met
Was what I made most dear (clear)
Then one day I found that I
My mind, my soul, and flesh
Was just as mortal as they were
And now not quite as fresh
The image that I fawned upon
The reflection I adored
Was but of human denouement
And mirrored self-amour
Now no greatness lingers here
No moral high and grand
Except this caution, yet my friend,
Like me, “you’re just a man…”
Beautiful use of words creating an image.
Like me, “you’re just a man…” 🙂
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Thank you. I appreciate that.
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I did like it was going to CCP the last five lines but failed. It was put so well and ended so poetically.
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I don’t mind anything of mine being shared (if that is what you mean/Cut Copy Paste) and long as I am credited for having written it.
With that caveat share as you like.
And thank you again for the compliments.
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